SpiritoftheWolf's Reviews

[Bunnykill 5 Part 2]

Everyone's used what I would put here.

Seriously epic. There is only one thing I would actually change about this if I had any part in it, and that's the flashback to 5.1. Just to make things a bit clearer.

Other than that, beautifully made and worth the wait. I (along with many others more than likely) am glad that the effect on Dust was not permanent, and relish the fact that there is a chance for his berserk side to show up once again. I also enjoy how you've progressed with an actual story, as opposed to the previous Bunnykills that were just one offs.

I also like the aspect you have with Smoke. He's been in two other installments, once as a villain, then as an ally, and now as a villain again. Though the previous ones, as stated before, have nothing to do with each other, they still put together a personality for Smoke, singling him out as a mercenary: neither good nor evil, just capitalist.

I also like the reworking of Dr. Sludge. He was introduced with Dust as his project, but was killed before he could see what his creation could do. This time Sludge got first hand experience, and that just makes his death all the sweeter.

All that's left to say is you've made sure to keep your fan base sitting on the edge of their seats, waiting for the next scrap of delicious meat that is Bunnykill to be tossed into the pen. And I feel confident in saying that this is not the last we've seen of Snowball, though whether or not he will reappear in this storyline (if, that is, you continue it) is questionable.

Thank you for the wonderful flash!
5/5
10/10

~Argent

Mottis responds:

Thanks for the long review :D

[Elder Scrolls Adventures]

Why can't I remember!

I know this is a parody of something, I just can't remember what.

And lol Skyrim on a floppy disk!

[American Pokemon]

I'm having a crisis...

I find myself smiling, but at the same time I'm sad and somewhat disgusted. I mean, yeah, it's a satire. But seriously, couldn't you do something... y'know? Less depressing?

[Guitar Vs. Piano 1.2]

Sweet

I can't really remember if I've commented on this one before, but if I have, oh well.

I can definitely say that this version seriously pwns the original, but still needs more substance. Especially towards the end of the song. It just kind of... gets boring. Try adding a second guitar with a counter melody or something. Maybe even with a synth. Perhaps throw an orchestral touch on there by having some violins playing harmony.

Nice job anyways. 7/10

[Goukisan - Betrayal of Fear]

Gouki............... For... the... win

My mind is blown.... this is deserving of a 10/10, and it's not even completed yet. Maybe my resolve to be a good music critic has been worn down a bit, but I think that I would give this one a high ranking anyways...

It has good rhythm and a steady beat. Not to mention it appeals to the senses. It even keeps a good electronic feel throughout most of the song. I ESPECIALLY like the addition of the chimes. It adds body to places that would otherwise seem thin or empty. Try to add a little more movement in them though. Hitting the same note will only go so far. Also, you have a good placement of the chimes throughout. Not to much, but maybe could have a little more of them, at your discretion, of course.

I also like the dark feel it maintains. An excellent contrast to the higher notes.

Also, keep on using this drum set. It may be crappy, but it sounds good in this song. Maybe a -little- more bass and snare, but just a little.

Anyways, like I said, 10/10 coming right up. I look forward to hearing the completed version of this song.

~Spirit

[Goukisan - Betrayal of Fate]

This is what I was talking about

If you read my reviews for Guitar vs. Piano and GvP 2, you'll understand this better, but to the point, this song takes my previous "mood" and "feel" reviews and tosses them out the window.

The bass line stands out more, though the electronic feel was lost a little bit in the process. It provides a good, solid undertone that appeals to a person's darker emotions, yet can bolster their lighter ones.

The beat is just as fast and bouncy, which can also enhance one's lighter emotions.

Overall, this song is better, but not 10/10 material. If I could give an 8.5 I would, but it leans more towards a 9 (8.56), so that means this one is getting a 9/10. I look forward to another good sequel in the future.

[Wolf and Lantern]

Thank you.